Revised Poem

My poem was recently published in a meditation group's newsletter (Insight Meditation Community of San Francisco), but now that I look at it again (and with feedback from my boss Karen), I have a much improved version, as follows:

On Retreat at Spirit Rock (2005)

Emerging from the dining hall
after tea, a crowd gathers in silence
as the bright circle of a full moon
edges over the hillside--
everything depends
on just this moment.

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